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There’s a billy on the open fire Piles of beech wood by the door Smokey stains adorn the iron roof Wax drips on bench and floor. Old cobwebs drape the windows Dog-eared cards upon a shelf The half a dozen Readers Digests Will fill the evening by yourself. Outside the rain is pouring down As you brew your cup of tea A candle betrays a subtle draft But you're warm and quite comfy. Bunks line against a single wall You see where mice have chewed Checking socks upon the mantelpiece Again enjoying the pleasing mood. As you sign within the guestbook A chance to read the travellers tales Of epic journeys, in stunning land Huge success and classic fails. Lives saved by simple shelter To casual stops along the track Unplanned stays for many a day Seen as palace, a villa, and shack. And to you this place is special It’s a place you just adore. And though you’ve never visited, You know you've been in here before. *The NZ Department of Conservation manages a network of over 950 huts of all shapes and sizes. They provide unique places to stay, refuge from bad weather, or rest and recover while experiencing the great outdoors.

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Date: 7/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Mark - a joy to read and I'm happy that I grew an inkling of what you spoke before I saw the footnote. I think there may be one 'your' where you mean 'you're', but I'm way tired and could be wrong. I can always be wrong, but not about your poem being good ... CayCay (OK, last line, 3rd stanza)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 7/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
I tossed and turned all the night, worried that in my tired state I had caused you unnecessary 'grief.' Funny, what gnaws at us, isn't it? Now that I'm bright eyed, I really got a grin reading your response to me, too cute! I once got chewed out at work (long ago) for typing 'your' instead of 'you're' - again, funny what sticks. All the best ... CayCay
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Mark Woods
Date: 7/9/2016 12:02:00 AM
Actually your are 100 percent correct. My proof reading was well off this time! Thank you very muchly! : )

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