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Tribute To Yasmin Khan

DO NOT FORGET Your wired mind larger than Arabia like a continent shrouded with beauty and rage, I imagine you recalling the gush from Indian winds the taste salted by curry fragrance as your mouth drolls two languages, till lashes of day forget night’s kiss... Oh, but do not forget how desert sands whisper your songs, to drain your troubles on pita of seed-blessed lawns, your eyes traveling across gentle sky and down below, see the jasmines naming your dreams upon child-woman’s feet...for life-light sparks in your womb, breath swelling a prayer around moist dew... and here, through love for self and kin, you are safe within the overflowing beads of a tranquil moon ; your mouth a garden of bright joys unseen that even in ruins of wired mind, your breath shines among rocks... Oh, do not forget the 'I' in your life. ................................ Yasmin is a talented poet. She is from India but works hard in Saudi Arabia; direly missing her family most of the time.. I hope she comes back-- she left Poetry Soup a year ago due to the strain in her life. Here is one of Yasmin's lines: " Floundering, groping for a rational return..." Contest, Silent One's Tribute 6/30/2013

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Date: 8/10/2015 12:10:00 AM
Lovely tribute to a sweet poetess nette! I too hv read her many emotive poems!Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:41:00 AM
great tribute Nette congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 8/8/2015 10:05:00 PM
Nette, nice win.... SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2015 5:16:00 PM
What a lovely tribute Nette I do hope she comes back soon:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/8/2015 9:11:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/8/2015 7:36:00 AM
A terrific tribute nette. I'm sure one day she will be back...congrats
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:51:00 AM
Awesome work , i enjoyed reading it very much :)
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:07:00 PM
Nette, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/18/2013 2:28:00 PM
Our wonderful Yassie, she of the beautiful big heart and the sad eyes, a fine tribute which I hope lifts her spirits. Big Congrad's on your fine work taking the top spot! Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2013 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2013 3:04:00 AM
Oh, I will not forget this gem for a very long time Nette...Every line is absolutely loaded with exquisite words written the way only you can...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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Date: 7/16/2013 11:11:00 PM
I love the' life' in the last line, congrats!!
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Date: 7/16/2013 5:43:00 PM
Wow......your last line.......reminding one to remember the "I"..... how wonderful is that?!! Congratulations on a well earned winning poem!
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Date: 7/16/2013 5:20:00 PM
A great hugs, congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:04:00 PM
This is beautiful and very well written. It will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing and for readingt my poem.... Lucilla
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:19:00 AM
Excellent poem penned with beautification of sensational words. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:03:00 AM
Yes, remember who & where you are in life. Plus, remember those who matter around you. Gorgeous!
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Date: 7/1/2013 5:44:00 AM
Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/30/2013 10:34:00 PM
What a nice mystical poem with touches of beautiful scenes of nature! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/30/2013 9:40:00 PM
Oh nette you come from a different place...an angel here among us bringing peaceful words, thank you
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Date: 6/30/2013 8:11:00 PM
You paint beauty like no other my friend, and your thoughts are as grand as the winds of which you speak! I love how you brought the moon into this poem, a very special inclusion with peace and tranquility within its form! Your last line is quite inspirational, or was there something else you were trying to show there, I sense a glimmer of something! Well, this is a spectacular write my friend, I loved reading each and every line of this delightful poem! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/30/2013 2:10:00 PM
This is so beautiful Nette.It takes me to another world...beyond this sky.Just wonderful!
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Date: 6/30/2013 12:35:00 PM
Your poem is just the thing I needed to read today. It has a healing mood that speaks to my inner reflections.Beauty-full.
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Date: 6/30/2013 12:13:00 PM
Captivating imagery dear Nette.Magical!
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Date: 6/30/2013 8:51:00 AM
Inspiring and captivating! Unique in its essence!
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