Home » Poems » John Lawless » Treed - For One Liner Contest

Treed - For One Liner Contest

TREED Family – its what falls out when you shake the tree. 12/6/2015 submitted to - One liners three – Poetry contest sponsor – Silent One

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/11/2015 8:50:00 PM

I like this humorous take on family, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/9/2015 12:11:00 AM

:) Good one!

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 6:09:00 PM

very clever. Congrats.

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/8/2015 5:22:00 PM

Nicely said, John. Congrats on your nice win. Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:52:00 PM

thanks Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2015 5:17:00 PM

Love it! Congratulations with your wonderful win, John! :~)Eve

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:52:00 PM

thanks Eve

Skat A

Date: 12/8/2015 4:42:00 PM

John, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:52:00 PM

thanks SKAT

Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2015 1:51:00 PM

well done, John. congrats

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:51:00 PM

thanks Lin...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2015 1:35:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poems in "One liners three- family" contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/8/2015 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest John.

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:51:00 PM

thank you Nayda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2015 12:51:00 PM

- A good one, John - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:50:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/7/2015 12:35:00 AM

Adorable! Very good, John ... CayCay

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:50:00 PM

thank you CayCay....it has been said that there's a wrench to fit every nut in the family....

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/6/2015 8:37:00 PM

John, I enjoyed your take on the theme. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2015 3:49:00 PM

thanks Alexis for stopping to read and comment