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Tree and the Moon

The lone tree exists out in a large field Alone it hides itself truly concealed The moon shines down upon it bright and true The tree became everything that it knew Clouds cover the moon creating darkness Leaving all things obscure and quite useless Moon appears back to illumine the tree The light appears brilliant so you can see The tree absorbs all the moonlight right there To become a mighty tree that does care Tree knows it will be the show of the land For the light of the moon made it quite grand
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:28:00 AM
    I like so much every line in each couplet of yours my dear friend Russell! The lines vividly describe the power and beauty of the moon being absorbed by the tree. Great feeling and image here! Thank you so much for sharing again this outstanding piece/precious gems of yours and for your kind visit with inspiring comments on my latest write! More power and blessings to you always! Have a blessed weekend in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:35:00 AM
    beautiful write, my friend

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Excellent couplet, fantastic image, wonderful expression!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Splendid couplet rhyming, flow and imagery! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith