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Toy Boat In the Fountains

Out of the good the bad emerges. The cold wind bites. The ocean surges. Waves appearing as big as mountains. Like a toy boat in the fountains. Your miles from land and it doesn't look good. So you say a prayer to God that's understood. You've been here before when all your hope died. The promises were made. I'm gonna change, you lied. This time I really mean it you convince yourself. On your knees knowing it's over. Again you plead for his help. Please Lord, if I make it this time no more lies will I be caught in. But then the sun comes out and the promises are forgotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/17/2009 9:44:00 PM
Ouch, this one strikes some nerves in everyone I guess, or at least in some persons; good reflection; in the end, how significant is a promise for us; is it significant because it is made to divinity or behind the name of God we hide our tatooed skin? and if we do not accomplish what was promised, what implications does it have? yes, it is hard to keep a promise to ourselves and to windy cosmos. Thanks for the experience!!!=)
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