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Touching

Two bodies entwined...
Sultry feeling spreads quickly
Heat sparks engulfing us

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Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/26/2012 11:49:00 AM

Delightful imagery. - Chuck

Roman Chebukin

Date: 2/24/2012 8:12:00 PM

I got goose bumps right now for some reason, after reading this.

Charles Ruble

Date: 2/22/2012 8:01:00 PM

Nice write,Thanks for the comment on my poem being featured,It means a lot to me coming from you all of the others on here,don't consider myself that good but it gets the emotions out.Again thanks.

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 1/30/2012 8:51:00 AM

Wow Hot!

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/30/2012 8:36:00 AM

Very sensual !! ohh myyy !!

Michele Ortiz

Date: 1/30/2012 7:20:00 AM

I can picture this. Lovely Poem!

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/29/2012 3:33:00 PM

Thanks once again, Carol, for your kind comment. I am really enjoying my new found retirement [semi-retirement]. Publishing books and PoetrySoup give me lots to do. Love, Maureen x

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/28/2012 12:54:00 PM

Fantastic rhythm of two entwined bodies in the form of haiku. Enjoyed and loved, bl

Roman Chebukin

Date: 1/27/2012 9:38:00 PM

Short but to the point. Lovely.

Janet Vick

Date: 1/27/2012 6:19:00 AM

You certainly gave me a smile reading this cause I remember when.... take care. Janet

Broken Butterfly

Date: 1/27/2012 4:17:00 AM

Very romantic and lovely Carol. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for my first place in your What I love About Poetry Soup Contest.

Dalila Agtani

Date: 1/27/2012 4:14:00 AM

Whew, the feeling is contagious Carol. Nicely written. I wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you for all your inspiring comments. Love Dalila

Isa Mahrie

Date: 1/27/2012 3:31:00 AM

Beautiful ... :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/27/2012 12:15:00 AM

Hey this is one glowing write Carol,, enjoyed, also thank you for the win you awarded me it must have been quite a hard job there were so many great entry's......