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Two bodies entwined...
Sultry feeling spreads quickly
Heat sparks engulfing us

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  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:49:00 AM
    Delightful imagery. - Chuck

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:12:00 PM
    I got goose bumps right now for some reason, after reading this.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:01:00 PM
    Nice write,Thanks for the comment on my poem being featured,It means a lot to me coming from you all of the others on here,don't consider myself that good but it gets the emotions out.Again thanks.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Wow Hot!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
    Very sensual !! ohh myyy !!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:20:00 AM
    I can picture this. Lovely Poem!

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 3:33:00 PM
    Thanks once again, Carol, for your kind comment. I am really enjoying my new found retirement [semi-retirement]. Publishing books and PoetrySoup give me lots to do. Love, Maureen x

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Fantastic rhythm of two entwined bodies in the form of haiku. Enjoyed and loved, bl

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 9:38:00 PM
    Short but to the point. Lovely.

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:19:00 AM
    You certainly gave me a smile reading this cause I remember when.... take care. Janet

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 4:17:00 AM
    Very romantic and lovely Carol. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for my first place in your What I love About Poetry Soup Contest.

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 4:14:00 AM
    Whew, the feeling is contagious Carol. Nicely written. I wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you for all your inspiring comments. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 3:31:00 AM
    Beautiful ... :)

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 12:15:00 AM
    Hey this is one glowing write Carol,, enjoyed, also thank you for the win you awarded me it must have been quite a hard job there were so many great entry's......

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:53:00 PM
    like... typo

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:48:00 PM
    Carol, very la la... sounds liek nerves just got naughty... enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:46:00 PM
    wow! lovely senryu, spreading passion everywhere. good luck on the contest carol

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 6:25:00 PM
    A sensuous write .Enjoyed the read Carol.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Good title for this sensuous one, Carol! Thanks for the placement in your contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Wow, this is hot!! Feeling the flames of passion here! Blessings, Rhonda