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i'm allmost afraid to ask
it's almost none of my business
but when it comes to you my love
it becomes a time for kindness
the secrets you won't tell me
seem to threaghten to take you away
now so it seems that it may happen anyday
either i forgot to ask or you forgot to mintion
what's really going on
what has our curious attention
no, it won't chase me away
no matter your condition
i love you any way you are
and that is our tradition
like those married for a long time
we have been commisioned
we love each other forever
no matter our condition
i have a fairy godfather
who loves me very much 
he can change your situation
with one single touch
close your eye's and just believe
in something loving us
and just as surely as you believe
try very hard to trust
and if thing's don't workout 
the way you want them too 
perhaps there is something better
for both me and you
we shouldn't question wisdom
or ever doubt true love
but still we'll search for sympathy
from a place up above
find peace in gaining patience
is often part of the plan
and when your much much older
by then you'll understand

Copyright © john loving iii

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 4:43:00 PM
    No doubt about it, your poetry ranks high in my book, great story and such great rhyme.

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 5:24:00 AM
    Beautiful words written...luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 10:22:00 AM
    Dear John, thanks for your comments on my poem about the scattered ashes. I'm not surprised you could relate to it as well. I hope you find joy and peace when you celebrate Thanksgiving this year. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 12:28:00 AM
    just drop by and took a pause here after reading your poetry. beautiful...

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:52:00 AM
    A very, 'Dramatic Verse' dear poet ! Flat out wisdom sir ! TY for sharing this instructional write. Have a wonderful week....much love, james

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 4:02:00 PM
    I'm not keeping any secrets from you...I replied to soup mail but don't know if you saw it...and fyi no I don't wear glasses, I see all too clearly as it is...

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii
    Date: 11/9/2011 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    don't wear glasses. that's why you can get all your colors right!
  1. Date: 11/9/2011 11:51:00 AM
    A poem that comes from the heart filled with feeling. Thank you dear friend on your wishes for our new grandson Aaron. We are truly blessed. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 6:35:00 AM
    good morning john... I came to read the poem.... You must have had removed it... anyway about this poEm, you lost me at the ending... But your words touched,my heart... I'm a very hard person to understand.. I wish my kids would open up with me.. And seek God in their hearts... Enjoyed..p.d

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:37:00 AM
    Some folks find it difficult to open up and actually allow love to enter their hearts, John. It takes a little coaxing sometimes. If this was written about someone you know, I hope you have shared it with her. She will see the love in your heart. Please send me your address so I can mail a Christmas card to you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:12:00 AM
    Beautiful! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem! ----Lori