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Tony's Torrid Toga - For Contest

Tony wants to teach Mary some yoga, While dressed in a short, little toga He bends over the mat, Where she just then had sat. From jail Tony cannot now teach yoga.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:40:00 PM

Oh what a site to see, grats on your write!

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 5/1/2015 6:35:00 AM

Hi Casarah, You have hit the nail square on the head . . Oh what a sight! Thanks for commenting. Diane L.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/30/2015 10:43:00 AM

Tony chose Romans' toga to teach Mary yoga?! Hahaha. Congrats to your awesome WIN Diane!!! ^_^

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 12:34:00 PM

Teddy, Tony was a phony when he wore that toga and Tony never should have been teaching yoga! Ha Ha. Best regards, Diane L.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:22:00 PM

Great title and poem. congrats on your fine win!

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea. It was fun to write and only took a moment or two. Diane L.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 7:46:00 PM

Hahaah..! Funny :~)a 7 Congratulations on your wonderful win.

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Eve. So many nice comments! Diane L.

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:22:00 PM

DIANE, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 8:34:00 AM

Thank you Skate and love right back at you! Diane L.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 4:57:00 PM

Hi Diane, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Linda . . Limericks are new to me, that being my second one. Kinda fun to write though. Diane L.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 4:00:00 PM

This made me smile Diane - congrats on your 3rd place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2015 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Diane - I had fun and have learned a lot from my experience - I know now about making my rules clearer - but I did have good fun judging it:-) Hugs jan xx

Diane Lefebvre
Date: 4/30/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan. I was not expecting to win, but thought after I wrote it, I would give it a try. And . . Congratulations on your first contest! Diane L.