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My children, standing 'round my bed, Are whispering and crying. The fuss they cause would make you think Some poor old soul was dying. I laugh inside and ask myself, "What do these youngsters know?" The spring of life still flows in me. It's not my time to go. I count the times I've cheated Death And sent him on his way. Through fever, illness, injury, age, I've held that thief at bay. I chuckle now as I recall The time he almost won-- The day he staked a claim to me And my new baby son. I shook the fever from my brow. Death shied away and fled. Since we escaped his clutches then, I've nothing now to dread. I suddenly am very tired. I'll close my eyes and rest. I'm sure tomorrow holds for me A new, exciting quest. written, late 1980's Date: October 28, 2017 Contest Title: Standard Contest No. 45 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/17/2017 3:26:00 PM
I'm new to soup...I loved the write. Let me get this straight: so did you actually enter this 100 times in a row before getting #2 in 2016?
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/17/2017 3:44:00 PM
Michael, welcome to the Soup! I'm glad you liked the poem. The "100" is part of the title the sponsor gave her contest, but I didn't enter it 100 times before placing. (That would be very discouraging indeed! LOL!) Janice
Date: 7/23/2015 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful sweet right, blessings of life to keep fighting. Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2015 3:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 7/15/2015 1:53:00 PM
Janice, to embrace days like this, is what I live for... ~LOVE LINDA~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/23/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Janice
Date: 7/15/2015 10:07:00 AM
This is perfect, keep on keeping a step ahead of him!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/15/2015 11:10:00 AM
That's right, Richard! Thanks Janice
Date: 6/30/2015 11:54:00 PM
JANICE, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/1/2015 3:09:00 PM
SKAT, thank you so much! Janice

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