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Tomorrow

Let the frog’s cheering croak celebrate my renewal tonight Let it be my song of luck For tomorrow I will leave to break free from this cave and find my fitting place where sunrise's promise unfold I'm certain it is there where the rooster’s prophesy at dawn is never false I made a pact with my heart and sealed it with past lesson’s tears to never ever listen to the doubtful crowd My heart is the only valid compass and I’ll follow its hunches and gut I’m certain that it’ll lead me to a sunlit place where my self will thrive and germinate

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/29/2010 3:48:00 AM

Well penned with a deeper meaning, Juan! Enjoyed reading your poem today! And thank you for commenting on my work...Have a great day!....Gert

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/24/2010 4:45:00 PM

Enjoyed this write. Follow your heart and control your own destiny. God Bless Phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 7/24/2010 10:22:00 AM

Yes! There can be a lot of weeds growing in your garden. Much wisdom here. Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2010 12:00:00 PM

Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Juan. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/22/2010 4:31:00 AM

This sure is very uplifting Juan ^_^ What a delight to read this rainy evening and haha maybe later on I will hear frogs croaking ;) kidding aside, I just enjoyed how positive this write is-- keep on doing what you do best! -- nikko :)

Earle Brown

Date: 7/22/2010 12:10:00 AM

There is no one to blame when you control our own destiny. inspiring write.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/22/2010 12:04:00 AM

nice poem, the heart seems to have odd beats here and there, we just have to learn how their directions work c;