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Tomorrow, You Will Be Free

Please don't stop me, my love, let me lie down and kiss the ground, let me taste the taste of freedom on my tongue and remember my past no more. Let my tears mingle with the sand and the sun comfort my soul, for the earth has opened up her mouth and swallowed my past, no more pain, no more fear, only sweet music shall ring in my ears. Look down at her, O Lord, look down and see your daughter weeping in the sand, she ripped out her heart and has casted it into the sea, she said, "Tomorrow, I will be free." But the ground where she laid is now drunken with her past, affliction and confusion. The sea has spew out her heart and the sun has hidden his face. I tried to comfort her and said, "Come, my love, come, for tomorrow is still yet to come," but she cannot be comforted, her body's covered with wounds I cannot see and her words I do not understand. Night is fallen and my soul grows weak, but I will not leave her, I will cuddle her in my arms and whisper in her ears, "Tomorrow, you will be free, tomorrow, you will be free."

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Date: 9/3/2015 3:35:00 AM
Spewed. After I was retiring, Started writing poems which were inspiring and no matter form, style or way, would always make your day few more comforting and much better and am forwarding this email letter so your poetry writing will be much better. So with Poetry Soup will always consult so my poems will have a better result. Desire for writing inside me does bulge and God does allow me to indulge writing religiously, the best way to do and be. Jim Horn
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:43:00 PM
Very encouraging heartfelt write. #7
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Date: 8/21/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thank, you

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