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Toilet experiment

An abode, i have to hurry 
early every morn
 if not next part of diurnal 
of constipation and gas i 
shall mourn
so early or not, but squat 
abreast with the open 
windowed wall.
As the day proceeds 
gravity pull for stool 
becomes weak
is sun's heat inversely 
proportion to gravitate 
Is the case same for nigh 
by coconut trees?
Early the day, is there 
more force for pickings?  

Nevertheless, gravity 
factor asks us not to 
wake up late
gravity during morning in 
toilet is always great.

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations!!! Sudesh --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:27:00 AM
    thank u everyone for commenting and taking out time for mthis reading.......

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 8:54:00 PM
    Sudesh, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Hahahahah nice and well penned,love your style . Welcome to poetrysoup,hope you find this place a safe haven for the display of your talents. Hugs and love.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:33:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Sudesh! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 12:15:00 AM
    Wow, very interesting and Welcome to Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 10:50:00 PM
    In England many people say when I am to see Queen Elizabeth, Sudesh

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:50:00 PM
    wow, what a poem title and topic... Sudesh, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@