Together

I need you to know
That I care about you
Even if I've known you for a short time
Everything I say is true
And I hope you
Will believe me

Miles that seperate
The feelings that I was scared to show
You continuosly take my breath away
You know me better than I know myself

I love you
For you're my heart and soul
My life will never dull
It's as if I'm a book,
You've opened me up
And read inside out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 5/13/2009 2:03:00 PM
good wirte keep up the good work.
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Date: 12/5/2008 7:59:00 PM
Caring is a two way street. You get what you give. But, don't ever under-estimate yourself...remember what you've written..."I'm a book..." - consider yourself a mystery novel. Let them get to know you on YOUR terms and conditions...heart and soul will eventually follow through extinctively from there...Peace always, John
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:54:00 AM
nice write, it's good to hear things are looking up for you, keep on writing on.
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Date: 12/3/2008 8:55:00 PM
Hey i just texted u and srry for not messaging back yeasterday my baby called and i lost track of time lol swrrys again....Love Joanie
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Date: 12/3/2008 8:17:00 PM
deep poem filled with alot of feeling and emotion. thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/3/2008 6:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful write, I can tell this is from your heart. Whoever this is for, I hope they see this. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/3/2008 6:54:00 PM
"Hello Precious Alexandria!"~It is always good to hear from you dear young lady! Also, I really liked your write here-it is as it should be-filled with pretty and bright-not gloom and hopelessness!? And, I am very glad that you have found someone dear young lady! This is wonderful-yet, don't place all of your hopes and happiness upon only this!? Keep your eyes to the skies, "Love Always Unto Your Loves, John!"~Bye Alexandria:)
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