Together

I need you to know That I care about you Even if I've known you for a short time Everything I say is true And I hope you Will believe me Miles that seperate The feelings that I was scared to show You continuosly take my breath away You know me better than I know myself I love you For you're my heart and soul My life will never dull It's as if I'm a book, You've opened me up And read inside out

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 5/13/2009 2:03:00 PM

good wirte keep up the good work.

John Heck

Date: 12/5/2008 7:59:00 PM

Caring is a two way street. You get what you give. But, don't ever under-estimate yourself...remember what you've written..."I'm a book..." - consider yourself a mystery novel. Let them get to know you on YOUR terms and conditions...heart and soul will eventually follow through extinctively from there...Peace always, John

Michael Romero

Date: 12/4/2008 6:54:00 AM

nice write, it's good to hear things are looking up for you, keep on writing on.

Joanie Yeager

Date: 12/3/2008 8:55:00 PM

Hey i just texted u and srry for not messaging back yeasterday my baby called and i lost track of time lol swrrys again....Love Joanie

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/3/2008 8:17:00 PM

deep poem filled with alot of feeling and emotion. thanks for sharing

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/3/2008 6:58:00 PM

Such a beautiful write, I can tell this is from your heart. Whoever this is for, I hope they see this. Blessings, ~Michaela~

John Rhinem

Date: 12/3/2008 6:54:00 PM

"Hello Precious Alexandria!"~It is always good to hear from you dear young lady! Also, I really liked your write here-it is as it should be-filled with pretty and bright-not gloom and hopelessness!? And, I am very glad that you have found someone dear young lady! This is wonderful-yet, don't place all of your hopes and happiness upon only this!? Keep your eyes to the skies, "Love Always Unto Your Loves, John!"~Bye Alexandria:)