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Toe-N-Toe

Toe-n-Toe and the flow, torrent flow, tween toe n de toe, it rose to a fever pitch, tween her thighs, she gripped him, just so! the heat of the flesh ceased to itch, just a bit..... but he was rising and rising, & rising some more, and harder the fever got pitched, he tried to escape, but no giddy-up-go.... till into the black sweet exhaustion you know, he slipped and he slipped bloody slipt...... Don re:Debbie Duncan "She Waits"

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Date: 7/10/2013 8:59:00 AM
Well Debbie did write 'She waits'....lol. Interesting and humorous reply. Hugs
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:00:00 PM
yes it inspired a reply heheheh in the heat of the night it fitted just right, what more can i say:)
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Date: 7/8/2013 1:54:00 PM
Yes, but does that mean you liked my poem ;}
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