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Echoes in the hall, evening shadows creep
The far off mountains bathed in softest pink
Soon this  night will put our day to sleep
Echo in the hall, evening shadows creep
For yesterdays we are prone to weep
Of the wonders of today we now must think
Echoes in the hall, evening shadows creep
The far off mountains bathed in softest pink




8/6/13

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  1. Demba Avatar
    Alian Demba
    Date: 10/6/2013 4:02:00 PM
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    Nyce love the repetition at first and the whole is beautiful
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/1/2013 2:50:00 PM
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    nice win...PD
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/27/2013 12:17:00 PM
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    Very well written winning Triolet..Enjoyed reading this gentle end of the day work..Congrats..Sara
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    Danesh Morgan
    Date: 8/26/2013 4:14:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win. Morgan
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    SKAT A
    Date: 8/24/2013 5:40:00 PM
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    it is a nice win....SKAT
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/24/2013 8:56:00 AM
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    congrats on a fine win
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 8/23/2013 6:46:00 PM
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    I agree with Carrie. This is well thought out.. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 8/23/2013 2:01:00 PM
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    I would have thought this high on the list........it is lovely !! Congratulations !!
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    Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 8/23/2013 6:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your victory. G.
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    Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 8/22/2013 8:06:00 AM
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    I told another poet that I am enjoying being introduced to unfamiliar styles while I review other poet's pieces, and this is another one that I enjoyed. I had no idea what a "triolet" is, but it's cool. " Line 5 is awesome; it totally resonated with me. Another beautiful piece, Barbara!
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
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    Very nice (sorta eerie...) Terry (and an interesting form of poem!)
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/9/2013 6:33:00 AM
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    I really like your repeat line..Great work..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..I am glad that you were surprised with my ending..Sara
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    Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
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    What a lkovely mystical feeling that poem gave to me, well done Barbara, very enjoyable Peter
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    Stephen Kilmer
    Date: 8/7/2013 6:34:00 PM
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    Very nice and soothing. Almost like a mantra. I think I will repeat this until I fall asleep. Kilmer
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 8/7/2013 5:50:00 PM
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    Absolutely stunning Barbara
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/7/2013 8:29:00 AM
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    wonderful write....best wishes