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Today and Tomorrow

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Today and Tomorrow

Echoes in the hall, evening shadows creep The far off mountains bathed in softest pink Soon this night will put our day to sleep Echo in the hall, evening shadows creep For yesterdays we are prone to weep Of the wonders of today we now must think Echoes in the hall, evening shadows creep The far off mountains bathed in softest pink

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Nyce love the repetition at first and the whole is beautiful

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:50:00 PM
    nice win...PD

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Very well written winning Triolet..Enjoyed reading this gentle end of the day work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:40:00 PM
    it is a nice win....SKAT

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:56:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:46:00 PM
    I agree with Carrie. This is well thought out.. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 2:01:00 PM
    I would have thought this high on the is lovely !! Congratulations !!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:06:00 AM
    I told another poet that I am enjoying being introduced to unfamiliar styles while I review other poet's pieces, and this is another one that I enjoyed. I had no idea what a "triolet" is, but it's cool. " Line 5 is awesome; it totally resonated with me. Another beautiful piece, Barbara!

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Very nice (sorta eerie...) Terry (and an interesting form of poem!)

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:33:00 AM
    I really like your repeat line..Great work..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..I am glad that you were surprised with my ending..Sara

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
    What a lkovely mystical feeling that poem gave to me, well done Barbara, very enjoyable Peter

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Very nice and soothing. Almost like a mantra. I think I will repeat this until I fall asleep. Kilmer

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:50:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning Barbara

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:29:00 AM
    wonderful wishes