Today

Today 

Pouring buckets today
A day to have soup and 
Play on the internet
Or read my favorite
Book or watch old movies
Day for hot chocolate
Topped with sweet marshmallows

But not some other day

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James Fraser

Date: 11/12/2009 3:29:00 PM

Oh my Sara, we have many of these days in Scotland >> James

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 11/11/2009 3:48:00 PM

MMMMM you made me hungry your writing is pretty good I will keep an eye on your work

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/11/2009 1:48:00 AM

Sorry I meant my best wishes( not wished!) to Doris. I'ts a pity that we cannot correct comments...Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/11/2009 1:45:00 AM

Had no marshmallows for ages. But I guess it would be too sweet for me anyway (Won't go along with diabetes). Today is such a day and have to go ahead with my packing. No time to read (a pity). Thank you for your comment on Day and Night. Good to know that your daughter Doris will be ok soon. My best wished to her....Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 11/11/2009 12:16:00 AM

Like the charm of this Sara.Rgds Brian Hope Doris is pleased with her success in Michael's contest.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 8:54:00 PM

Yummy cold and cosy..hoy choc and marshmallows..what a good day--Today;)Charma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/10/2009 8:28:00 PM

Sound very nice and relaxing. It is good you have such days. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/10/2009 8:22:00 PM

Sounds like a nice restful day. Rain always makes me tired. God Bless Phyl

John Freeman

Date: 11/10/2009 5:35:00 PM

Sounds like a fun day to me Sara, for the poet to become inspired, to write. Smile! The hot chocolate and marshmallows don't sound bad either. Lol, Sincerely, Love, Moses