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To Survive - Allegory Contest

The rose and the lilly Fight for my attention Both have a perfume One delicate and perfect The other pungent and profuse I am a bee that needs pollen to survive The pungent lily makes my head twirl The delicately perfumed rose, leaves me hungry Is there a choice No….i am a survivor. I am saying Don’t think pretty is the best Steady looks can feed the soul Survive = using ones intelligence To surmise, is to survive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 9:17:00 PM
Seren, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 11:22:00 PM
Seren, . CONGRATULATIONS... goodnight....LINDA
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:13:00 AM
Seren, sweetheart, you always leave me with the feeling that your creations are from a loving heart.... Yes... You did it right... Love ya.... Jake
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2013 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Jake....Seren
Date: 10/15/2013 6:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Very expressive..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara ...Seren
Date: 10/15/2013 8:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/15/2013 1:23:00 PM
Thsnk youi Ram ...Seren
Date: 10/15/2013 7:12:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Seren! Your poem is beautiful and wise! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/15/2013 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda ... Seren
Date: 10/2/2013 4:10:00 PM
This is a brilliant and wonderful write my friend! You have immersed me with beauty by the very works of this poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/3/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Russell are you writing one as well...Seren
Date: 10/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
Beautiful piece. I didn't find this one easy..you did a great job. BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/3/2013 8:28:00 AM
Neither did I Barbara, am never sure whether I have done things right...Seren

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