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I want to feel my whole world burst, see scintillating stars dispersed across a vast unsullied sky the sapphire blue of my mind’s eye when life was fresh and untraversed. I want to jump again. . . headfirst into the ocean, be immersed as passion’s billows multiply. I want to feel! Wake up, my heart! I WANT that thirst, expect the best and not the worst, to have my breath be stopped - to cry for heartbreak’s sake - not stop to sigh with rue that Fate can’t be reversed. . . . I want to feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/15/2018 2:10:00 PM
Wow, awesome, Andrea. A beauty!
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Date: 10/22/2017 2:33:00 PM
I love it!! I want to jump again...headfirst says it all. Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 10/21/2017 6:48:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/1/2016 8:09:00 AM
Excellent Andrea, congratulations...
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:26:00 PM
Congrats Andrea... I want to feel too
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:40:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:45:00 PM
What an uplifting and beautiful Rondeau, Andrea. I "feel" it ....each and every line !! :)
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Date: 7/13/2016 11:09:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. .lovely lines:)
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. This brings back some deep longings of things lost many year back and were all but forgotten. I really like it. ...Fran
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:20:00 PM
Andrea this is an awesome Rondeau! Very beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 3/29/2014 5:54:00 AM
Hi, my dearest friend Andrea! I'm stopping by for a while to enjoy this precious masterpiece of yours. An excellent rondeau giving me an inspiration to try it soon. Thank u thank u soo much for sharing! I'll b back soon to read more. Have a nice weekend! Biggest hugs! love lots always & forever, Leonora
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Date: 3/5/2014 4:48:00 PM
Nicely stated in this wonderful poem Andrea. Been a while since i stopped byto read your poetry. soup mail
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:08:00 AM
The more I read you, the more I become a fan of yours. Congrats.......
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Date: 2/10/2014 10:26:00 AM
Way to go with this awesome winner..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2014 7:54:00 AM
I enjoyed my third read and now add a hearty congratulations!
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Date: 2/10/2014 4:26:00 AM
Hi there congrats to you once more Andy love xx
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Date: 2/9/2014 11:38:00 PM
Nicely done, my lady! Congrats on your fine win in the contest!!!
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:51:00 PM
It is so nice to use the poem of a little known poet....let's hope more will check out this poet's work. In the meantime.....you did it justice with your own!! Congrats to you, Andrea!
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea...hugs
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:20:00 PM
Don't let them fool you. You can always go back. Just don't expect it to be the same. You see life moves in a linear fashion...straight ahead or so it seems. But when you try and break that line into a circle thats when the fun begins because you start breaking physical laws. And only the gifted can do that my dear. ~Kilmer
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:57:00 AM
What is gone, that's gone. Never comes back again except memories. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 1/22/2014 4:56:00 PM
I like!! You captured something. And then you made us want it too. 2 thumbs up
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Date: 1/19/2014 11:13:00 AM
Andrea....again and again...I'm carried away by the magic of this piece! A rondeau was been beautified by your words...My favorite lines???? GOOD GRIEF...I was going to say the first line...then the second....then...I can't! It is beautiful through and through!!! I love it! Hugs!
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Date: 1/17/2014 12:14:00 AM
This is such a fine and lovely piece of poetry:)
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:38:00 PM
love this powerful write, Andrea. Just how we've all felt at times
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