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Titanic Twins

Trip to the movies to see ship submerged, Teasing and torment has been Friday's fare. First an argument o’er who's to go first, and not-so-nice nephew pulls brother’s hair. In revenge, the other bloodies an arm; loud wailing ensues from crocodile eyes. It’s time to go home now, they’ve lost their charm. Six-year old twins – a shipwreck, pint-size.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/17/2013 10:32:00 AM
nice poem,,,, love the movie and history ;}
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Date: 8/19/2013 12:03:00 PM
A lovely poem with such delightful creative wit.
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Date: 8/9/2013 6:26:00 AM
Very creative work using the CAPTCHA...Enjoyed reading a few moments from your life..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:03:00 PM
haha, it's adorable, and you got TWO stanzas. Only one I think I saw like this!
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:39:00 AM
LOL maybe want to put times 2 on here for using letters twice enjoyed the read though and boy sure know this feeling lol great imagery and too play on words as other said thanks for sharing I too did this one
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Date: 8/4/2013 12:22:00 PM
so well put and charming at that.... kids will be kids... love the play of words, reason.. huggs
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Date: 8/4/2013 12:16:00 PM
Love this little alliterative gem. Slips and trips off the tongue so prettily. SuZ
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Date: 8/4/2013 9:05:00 AM
From a mother of boys- you made me smile.
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:50:00 AM
nicely done gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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