A Reflective Sheen

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I'm in a small café nursing a hot coffee. And, between steamy sips, I gaze at a mirror. There, reality's a reflection; it's not real. And, like caricatures, flaws fall into focus. I know; it's merely glass with a reflective sheen. And yet, I am transfixed, watching time come and go. My eyes are scrutinized, as I stare at myself. And it's fascinating, guessing who will blink first. Shifting shadows; provide such entertainment free. And voyeurs; stealthily watch life slip by, unseen. (Blank Verse) 7/10/2015

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/8/2018 8:22:00 AM

A most delightful read, Emile. I particularly love these two phrases "And it's fascinating guessing who’ll blink first." and "And voyeurs stealthily watch time slip by unseen." Much enjoyed.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/16/2015 3:12:00 PM

People watching! I have a friend who really loves to just watch any crowd. I suppose its harmless [I hate crowd LOL] Nice verse here. Light & Love

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 6:56:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/10/2015 4:51:00 PM

superb work with puzzling mirror images, emile... love the semi abstract mood of this one.. well composed!.. huggs

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/11/2015 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Nette, I enjoy your friendly visits and encouraging words. Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2015 4:07:00 PM

Those mirrors draw our attention..I have found there is an old woman who now stands between me and the mirror and it is very scary..I don't know who this old woman is.Thanks for stopping by..Time is runing out but then it could go on for more years than I can think about with each generation seeing more degeneration..Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/10/2015 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support. Emile.