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Time Away Visual 7

a time away from urban lights the breeze my cheek does softly kiss my heart is beating with delight a time away from urban light oh, let me heal again this night alone with just myself, pure bliss a time away from urban lights the breeze my cheek does softly kiss Visual #7

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Date: 6/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
Time alone sounds wonderful! Congrats on your win with this calming poem, Barbara! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:30:00 PM
BARBARA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 1:06:00 AM
this is quite sweet. I bet you enjoy camping out. Congrats in my contest, Barbara.
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Date: 6/8/2015 12:16:00 AM
A lovely Triolet, Barbara. If this doesn't do well, I'll go and buy a hat to eat. Viv x Ps- Can you lend me the price of a hat?
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Date: 6/7/2015 9:25:00 AM
Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Emile.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/7/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by..A lovely comment. BG
Date: 5/30/2015 6:47:00 AM
We all need those quiet times! I liked your poem...Darlene
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Date: 5/30/2015 2:30:00 AM
this is so beautiful Barbara - for the contest you need to add visual 7 to your title:-) Hugs Jan xx
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