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I can't help it but look at the clock, 
It is time for me  to move on for the day, 
And do so many more things around here, 
Because time never stop for me and you. 

Since we wake up till we all go to sleep, 
Time advances silently, and  endlessly, 
And we all need to get our breath,sometimes, 
But time was designed for God, to go on eternally. 

At least,on this earthly sod will end sometimes,we all know, 
But time will go on for others,for sure after we're gone,and in spite 
Of all, and even if life finishes here,still time will go on and on, 
And those left behind will have to deal still, with life and time,thats right! 

Time is ticking in every working clock all the time, 
So take your time for everything you need to do, 
But,please remember to take time for rest to, 
And with family and friends spend some of it too... 

Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 


Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter

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  1. Date: 9/22/2014 12:52:00 PM
    Last two lines are like good advice here, my lovely friend that's you felt out of your nice experience in daily life. Love in time and time in love, beautifully done. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 7:35:00 PM
    Thank you for your kind comments and all.About my "Sonnetina Rispetto" which the original name of my style, you got everything already that you need to know about it, with the instructions on how to write a poem with it.You already had this information with you I noticed in your poem, minus of course, my name as the creator that somehow accidentally, got omitted from my instructions when you posted it with your poem.Again,thanks for your interest in my form.God bless you, my friend.D.

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 2:35:00 PM
    I totally agree with you and add, Art is long, time is fleeting and waits for none. Dorian. I have written two soup mails and messages on AP. I am quite fascinated by your Sonnetina Rispeto. Presently my contest on Rispeto is on going here on the PS. May I expect some more information on your creation? Dorian