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Tides - Five Lines

The ocean has her romance with the shore; At times she rushes in with wild delight— But often creeps ashore with timid soul. Just like the ocean, we accept our plight Of ebb and flow—life’s highs and lows explore. © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~1st Place~ Contest: Five Lines/Metaphors and Simile Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Judged: 06/29/2015 Envelope Quintet .

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Date: 7/13/2015 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra. This is a beaut!
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Date: 7/1/2015 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7, Sandra. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:49:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Sandra! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:05:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 3:40:00 PM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Date: 6/29/2015 10:26:00 PM
Nicely done, Sandra. congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/26/2015 5:45:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and metaphor, Sandra! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:35:00 AM
Excellent analogy and paints a perfect picture of both the sea and life.....Ivor
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