Thunder, Lightning, Wind

thunder, lightning, wind heavy rain, night before last... twelve rain lilies bloom

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Date: 7/17/2014 1:59:00 PM

A beautiful outcome after the storm. Love this Haiku Sara, nice one, James :)

Date: 7/15/2014 9:04:00 AM

Nice haiku. I like it. Thanks for visiting my poetry. God bless you.

Date: 7/10/2014 11:41:00 AM

Wonderful haiku....Linda

Date: 7/2/2014 9:28:00 PM

oh here is a sweet one I missed. Love how it ended with the 12 rain lillies!!

Date: 6/29/2014 3:18:00 PM

despite thunder, lillies bloom.. great aha moment, sara.. enjoyed your 'ku.. huggs

Date: 6/28/2014 9:48:00 PM

Yes, I Agree there's always peace (pleasing or unpleasing) after the storm, sara

Date: 6/28/2014 9:24:00 PM

A story of life, Sara. Many a soul has bloomed after a thunderous experience. Very well done my friend. Loved it.... Robert.

Date: 6/28/2014 6:26:00 PM

Love your haiku, Sara. This reminds me of what a woman goes through before giving birth! (hopefully not 12 at one go, tough:)) // paul

Date: 6/28/2014 10:27:00 AM

:) Beautiful haiku. A storm is a powerful, at times scary thing, but the result here is beauty