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Through My Eyes

Through my eyes…

You are the sunset over a beautiful summer’s ocean.
Your colorful show leaves me breathless
As I lie down to watch you move,
Watch you stretch your arms across the horizon 
Draping the wondering clouds
In a masterful orange and purple organza.
And I see them strut across their makeshift ramp
Showing off their new clothes
To the rapture of the waves below.

What a show your presence creates

Through my eyes…

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 4:49:00 AM
    Pravir - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 9:08:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 4:58:00 PM
    Pravir - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 3:51:00 PM
    Beautiful write here Pravir ... I almost feel like I'm watching a fashion show and then again, its Mother Nature at her finest ... smile ... this is a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 8:15:00 AM
    Pravir, Congratulations for being featured here as I commend you for a nicely done poem. I enjoyed the soft touches of nature included. Wonderful Poem... MPK

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 12:09:00 PM
    Pravir, Heartiest congratulations on your poem Through My Eyes being featured this week. It is a beautiful write. You have used your pen as a paint brush to capture the grace and beauty of an enchanting sunset. Keep writing. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 4:49:00 PM
    Pravir congrats on having your poetry featured this week and for making it through the first round - God Bless

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 12:52:00 PM
    This is a lovely poem to be featured this week! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 9:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 9:18:00 AM
    Congratulations Pravir on "Through My Eyes" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

  1. Date: 10/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/27/2008 12:38:00 AM
    Awesome love poem. With vivid imagery and sensual wordings. Very well penned. Congratulations on being featured! Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 5:09:00 PM
    The beauty of this poem has me smiling. Congratulations on having it featured. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 3:37:00 PM
    Breathtaking poetry! Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar