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Wisp of the Chill

soft vanilla nights tasting pink strawberry tips... rainbow sprinkles pop a wisp of the chill sweet melon sprigs twist and shout... snow cones dance around! © ====== For contest: PD’s Neapolitan Ice-Cream Haiku

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/4/2011 4:21:00 PM

A very tasty, colorful write. Lots of carbination in that brew. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2011 3:40:00 PM

sounds like a grand treat for the tongue and tummy Nette luv.. good luck in the contest with this amazing dessert ...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/1/2011 4:36:00 PM

Now that's what I'm talking about...can I have some please? Great description of this wondrous treat, YUM!!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/1/2011 2:27:00 PM

Hey Nette a yummy write from you...enjoyed.Best wishes.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/1/2011 2:10:00 PM

Yummy, dear Nette. I want some of this gelato :) Love, iols :) (I love my nickname...)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/1/2011 2:05:00 PM

What a cute twist with the melon added there, nette :D yumm-- I think Arce has melon flavored ice cream? hugs :) wish you the best!

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/1/2011 11:59:00 AM

Yummy delight, Nette. Best wishes for the Winners' List in PD's contest. Love, Anna

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/1/2011 11:28:00 AM

I like this one, now you have raised the bar high for PD contest.... well done... and thanks I checked out your soupmail and you are right.. thanks for the heads up.... hugs all day for you.. Michael

Tony Lane

Date: 10/1/2011 11:26:00 AM

Makes me want two scoops. Tony