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Three-Story Pie

Whipped meringue piled high Underneath the rest of the pie Layer upon layer pleases the taker Mother the best pie maker Underneath the rest of the pie Vanilla custard soft and yellow lies Mother the best pie maker Now the recipe in memory has died Vanilla custard soft and yellow lie Layer upon layer please the taker Now the recipe in memory has died Whipped meringue--piled high

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 4:35:00 PM
might get explosive with gas from all the vegetables--the brocoli I ate is blowing me up. LOL
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:46:00 PM
you make your picture poems so easy and wonderful to read. the way you write the story without saying what actually happens to the mother with the best pie. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:57:00 PM
This reminded me of my mom's homemade pies. They were the best. I remember the neighbors always complimenting her on her baking ability. Thanks for your kind words on my limerick. Susan
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:28:00 AM
Reading your poetry today has been a yummy pleasure, Sara. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! (Try swirling lemon pudding with vanilla pudding...maybe that was how she did it...Smiles. Now, I want to try it. But with cool whip!) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:20:00 PM
Interesting write. I like the form. I should try it sometimes and it all sounds so delicious. Thanks for sharing, Sara, and thanks for your kind comments on mine and on facebook. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:08:00 PM
This form really enhances the the rhymes in the verse Sara. Good job, keep up the good work. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:39:00 PM
this is a very TASTY poem! I really like it. LUv, andrea ps wrong brian. I wrote that limerick years ago for someone else, but I think the one here is a lamb too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:10:00 AM
she was the best sweet maker, she put the love in,
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Date: 3/17/2010 9:21:00 AM
Oh, darn it! I was going to ask you for the recipe, Sara!! Sounds yummy! Enjoyed reading this. ...Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:47:00 AM
Very tasty talk Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:21:00 AM
Lovely pie's piece, Sara! Your poem is really mouth watering. Apple pies are my favourites. Thank you for your comments...Gert
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:41:00 AM
Yummy......sweet comfort for the soul! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:40:00 AM
Sounds delicious, Sara, and it was nice meeting you on Facebook! Love, carolyn
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