Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Thoughts of two poets

James Peranteau Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Thoughts of two poets which was written by poet James Peranteau. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by James Peranteau

Best James Peranteau Poems

+ Fav Poet

Thoughts of two poets

Our thoughts
tumbled
while we kissed,
lisping;

I love you

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/12/2011 5:39:00 PM
    wow I do so luv this piece James.. did u write this with another poet? it is so charming and enchanting with it's invitation of luv..

  1. Date: 4/3/2011 5:31:00 PM
    " lisping" is an unexpected word and atreat. i like it and the way you employed that. Thanks as alway, Gerard

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 8:08:00 AM
    Smiling , yes. Love the romantic thoughts on this write. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 6:16:00 PM
    You have me smiling with this one James. The first two lines really set the stage for the rest. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 3:36:00 PM
    Hi, James, I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate both your comments and your caring. I think highly of you and your work. Thank you, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 5:40:00 AM
    Hey there James, just dropping in to see how you are doing ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:10:00 AM
    Thanks for your comments, James. They always mean a lot coming from you. Please be sure to let me know when you post new work! I'm waiting... Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 12:38:00 PM
    So glad to see your poem on the hot 100 list, James! Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 5:44:00 AM
    Happy Weekend James with luv..

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 3:20:00 PM
    Just wonderful James, as always.....:) mega smiles

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 3:51:00 PM
    James u could write a romantic play with these elegant words my friend... lovely visuals so engaging in this piece .. thankxx for your sweet comments always welcome my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 9:20:00 AM
    Thanks for the smiles with this gem James ;-) so much tenderness.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 8:24:00 AM
    And that love binds people together. Much said in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 8:13:00 AM
    I can't find a poem I haven't read, so I'll just say - you had a pet iguana? Damn if that doesn't fit your sense of humor. This is Disney stuff. Can't you just see that iguana lisping "I love you." Please don't get pissed. I'm sure you loved your iguana. Actually, a person could love any animal that might somehow get into the house. I know I could. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 8:09:00 AM
    more smiles upon reading this sweet write ;) ^_^

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 7:46:00 AM
    Would two poets make it?...Enjoyed the romantic and passionate work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 10:01:00 AM
    Is this a tumble in the hay, Sir James? Very tender. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:58:00 PM
    Love the idea of those tumbling thoughts, James. Very cool!

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:50:00 PM
    You gave me a smile tonight, James. Thanks so much! I will write to you when I get home. Love you, Carolyn