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Thoughts of Two Poets

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                 Our thoughts
                     tumbled
               while we kissed
                      lisping

                  "i love you"

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 5:39:00 PM

wow I do so luv this piece James.. did u write this with another poet? it is so charming and enchanting with it's invitation of luv..

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/3/2011 5:31:00 PM

" lisping" is an unexpected word and atreat. i like it and the way you employed that. Thanks as alway, Gerard

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/23/2011 8:08:00 AM

Smiling , yes. Love the romantic thoughts on this write. love phyl

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/12/2011 3:36:00 PM

Hi, James, I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate both your comments and your caring. I think highly of you and your work. Thank you, Gerard.

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2011 5:40:00 AM

Hey there James, just dropping in to see how you are doing ;) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 7:10:00 AM

Thanks for your comments, James. They always mean a lot coming from you. Please be sure to let me know when you post new work! I'm waiting... Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 12:38:00 PM

So glad to see your poem on the hot 100 list, James! Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:44:00 AM

Happy Weekend James with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 3:51:00 PM

James u could write a romantic play with these elegant words my friend... lovely visuals so engaging in this piece .. thankxx for your sweet comments always welcome my friend with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/2/2011 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for the smiles with this gem James ;-) so much tenderness.. Love Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 3/2/2011 8:13:00 AM

I can't find a poem I haven't read, so I'll just say - you had a pet iguana? Damn if that doesn't fit your sense of humor. This is Disney stuff. Can't you just see that iguana lisping "I love you." Please don't get pissed. I'm sure you loved your iguana. Actually, a person could love any animal that might somehow get into the house. I know I could. Love, daver