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Thoughts

Thoughts are like fish in a brook Ideas swimming upstream Confused by the worms on a hook Boggled by life's dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/3/2011 1:53:00 AM
Some thoughts can be like that. But we can have nice, easy thoughts too. Interesting write.
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:39:00 PM
Indeed, this sounds like the struggles we encounter in life, John. Well said! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:01:00 PM
Great little verse you have there, John. Thanks for your enthusiastic comment. Glad I found you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:57:00 PM
lol thanks doc just having fun;)
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:50:00 PM
Nice analogy you have penned well, john
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