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Thoughts

. Like bolts of lightning I’ve felt the words from my fingers come forth My heart my brain sparking thoughts Out of them I dust the books of love with words I fantasize with paper and pen I cross fiords and skies I cry out loud from the high rocks of the sea the bolts riddle they rhyme the words and charm the hearts suspiciously they uncover my thoughts

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2010 7:01:00 PM

Another one i reallly like. WEll, James, I guess I will stop here for now. My back is killing me, but I do enjoy finding poets who do not write super long poems becuase I can go thru them fast making many comments! Luv, Andrea Ps I see a comment down here about making it to first round. Was this one that you entered last year then?

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/25/2009 7:56:00 AM

Congrats to you James! I remember this awesome write. Good luck in the finals! Hugs, shar xoxo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 2:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round James.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM

Dear James, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 9/24/2009 9:28:00 AM

Well done, best wishes in the next rounds James.Rgds Brian

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2009 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/11/2009 5:15:00 AM

Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you james!

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/10/2009 12:03:00 AM

James, congrats on your feature...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2009 3:03:00 PM

An excellent expression of a poet's true nature! Congratulations on this great poem among the featured works this week!! ~ Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/6/2009 12:11:00 PM

Well expressed Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Diane Christian

Date: 7/6/2009 10:42:00 AM

aww so beautiful brigns your writing come alive, congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

Diane Christian

Date: 7/6/2009 10:42:00 AM

this piece adds that extra spark God bless you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2009 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week James. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/5/2009 11:31:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured this week. More power and success. God bless. Ernilando

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/16/2009 4:21:00 PM

Wow, this is quite powerful. I am jealous as I have been experiencing quite the writers block lately. Love your creativity here resulting in one amazing write! And wow, what an awesome comment on my latest poem, I thank you so kindly. Made me feel great! Warmest wishes. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2009 6:21:00 PM

Such a creative recipe for creating great poetry, James! Careful now, you're revealing your secrets. (Now if I could just find some high rocks of the sea to help me on my way...) Very clever! Love, Carolyn

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/25/2009 7:02:00 AM

Beautiful indeed.