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Those Lips, That Smile

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Oh, me, that smile it shines a mile those lips so sultry sweet that mane of hair so rich and slick disheveled, still a treat! Your eyes of blue oh, what a hue a glacier full of fire those teeth that flash a pearly white a dream wrapped in desire Your voice....the silk the velvet plush of luxury divine the way it trembles on each note what it does, I can't define the way you move the way you shake the way the rhythm flows I move, I groove my body melts a rush that glows and glows My answer'd be to question asked "Tell me dear, are you lonesome tonight?" "No, I am not You're not forgot These thoughts still bring delight." Eileen Manassian! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_GanoEE7VUc Elvis at his finest! OH!!!

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/8/2015 11:02:00 AM

Reading you today reminds me of how difficult it is to read everyone and everything rewarding; so little time, so much talent. I try and will continue to try discovering and commenting on all the talent to be found on PS. This is a wonderful write, I love the flow, the rhyme, the content and MUST read more, my emotions and joy level require it! CayCay

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/20/2015 10:33:00 AM

Beautiful tribute to the King of Pop! I am still a fan! Thank you for sharing this gem! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/16/2015 5:53:00 PM

Phew he sure is f-i-n-e fine.. smooth as silk lines and an even smoother subject...:-) big smiles

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2015 3:14:00 PM

Ahhh and even the men loved him! Great showman and singer (I loved the voice). We (especially my sister) knew most of his songs by heart. No, dear, it's not fair that anyone should suffer the ordeal of lonesome nights! Hugs // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2015 12:53:00 AM

Oh Elvis ,So handsome ,and what an icon,what a voice.He had the full package..Lovelyvtribute to the king.

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/11/2015 10:53:00 AM

I'd like to think that Elvis is blowing you a kiss form the great beyond, for you're surely one of his biggest fans. Well written. Emile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/11/2015 10:49:00 AM

Now where ever did you find that video of me? Loved the poem. When I saw the video, I laughed when I see the 2 women give each other the evil eye, I said wow, there is a second poem there for sure!!! Hugs!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/10/2015 10:16:00 PM

You my friend have crafted an excellent , smooth flowing piece with this one. I am still working on my entry to that contest. I always try to put extra into certain contests that inspire my older muse..lol

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/10/2015 10:19:00 PM

Is there a contest going on this? I'm not aware of it. Someone send me a youtube link to one of his songs, and I was reminded how much I like him....and this was the result. I don't know of any contest. Please enlighten me, dear. Thanks

Elis Artis

Date: 11/9/2015 8:47:00 AM

So creative and well-penned:) +7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thank you, Elis. Appreciate the visit .

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2015 8:40:00 AM

Hi Eileen. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:29:00 AM

Hi, Rick. Anything new up, dear. I will check now. Hugs

Theresa Cw

Date: 11/9/2015 2:26:00 AM

I also agree with everything Silent One has said and even more.... hugs Theresa

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Theresa.....So sweet of you to visit and comment....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/8/2015 1:50:00 PM

I love the Elvis reference, it adds a bit of nostalgia to the piece. A woman like you should neve be lonely!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:33:00 AM

Thanks, dear Rick. Your last sentence is a treasure. Hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2015 11:04:00 AM

Your poem flows effortlessly off the tongue! A fantastic write, Eileen! Love, Kim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thanks, sweet Kim. You are an encouragement. This is a bit of a fun write. Hugs

Constance La France

Date: 11/8/2015 8:37:00 AM

Eileen, I have seen documentaries on Elvis and you captured the essence of him at his best, seems his life was difficult, I think his songs are amazing and so is your poem, amazing 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:34:00 AM

Yes, he did live a troubled life. Fame can do that to anyone, I guess. He has recorded gospel music...which has his signature touch. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/8/2015 5:23:00 AM

Lovely dedication to the sexy, charming Elvis! An excellent entertainer. : ) Love his quote about rhythm..Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/9/2015 9:35:00 AM

Yes, my dear. Elvis was a legend. The link I shared is him at his shaking gyrating best. :) Thanks for the visit.