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Those Feely Things - Not For Contest

Those Feely Things What are these feely things that come sneaking up on me I cannot find a use for them except to set them free. Sometimes a giggle does the trick but some are icky - gooey-thick causing me to whine and grump to curl up in a nasty lump, stomp my feet scream and yell for reasons that I cannot tell to those who wonder “what is wrong?” “where has my happy baby gone?” And then – they’re gone quick as they came those feely things without a name. So bear with me as I sort through the hows and whys of what to do – of being me – of being two. John G. Lawless 9/14/2015

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Date: 9/16/2015 1:15:00 AM
It's great to be doubly inspired by the contests. That is what makes Soup so dang fun. This was great!! A TWO year old. CAn any of us even remember back that far?
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2015 8:52:00 AM
Well Andrea we have a 9 mo old granddaughter and she has a 2 year old cousin...so watching them develop their personalities is a great amusement to the muse.
Date: 9/14/2015 11:18:00 AM
Brilliantly executed poem,liked the rhymes and the ending was especially good.
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Date: 9/16/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to comment Miraj always nice to hear from a new voice.

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