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This is Mine, All Mine

This is Mine, All Mine                                     by Chuck Keys

Fall day, perfect, 
Sunny brisk alive.
Filtered rays of sunlight. 
Shimmering through semi barren trees
Almost skeletal 
Scattered blown leaves
Patiently waiting their first winter freeze, 
So - very serene, calm, barely a sound,
A bird or two chirping
Sounding lost,
Looking about ready.

There, a small sparse bush
Proudly showing a tiny new green innocent bud, 
Nonchalantly waiting about. 
His chance to grow, 
Fading with shortened cooler days coming
On the trail, my dog, 
At my front, back and
                                      … side, 
Protectively jumping, sniffing, flying, yelping
Majestically prancing about and over,
Manly pawing his ground, 
Feeling heat from 
The October daytime warmed earth
Dried decaying broken leaves of time fading,

     In motion, 
     Wind behind his gate,
     Cantering soundlessly but hard, manly 
     Racing airborne paws; 
     Panting with passion, drooling in chase,
     Soaring gleefully effortlessly in-flight,
                                                                       ... off the ground 
                                                                       ... leaping high, higher, highest 
     Endlessly into the wilderness, 
     On his ground.  His movements
                                                           … echoing, uncontrolled.

     The tamed beast; driven as ever,  
     Head locked rigid aimed forward, high, tongue draped aside out
     Eyes opened squinting into the wind, starring affront
     Nose twitching alive on fire in hunt, 
     Tail erect, straight as an arrow on 
     Legs in sync with one another, together
     Body pulsing as one, muscles taught,
     On guard, with pride and ownership.
     He stops, panting eyes piercing, 
                                                          … side to side, front to back
    "This is mine, all mine" ... he says
                                                           ... he says to his daddy. 

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  1. Date: 10/22/2010 4:44:00 PM
    Another awesome write Chuck.. enjoyed every line with its creative theme tonight .. a vibrant and vivid landscape of story u presented to the reader.. enjoyed .. happy weekend with luv..

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 9:27:00 AM
    I love this picture very much, Chuck! I know this is from your can be so much better when we're grateful for our loyal pets, for nature's beauty..and it is all yours! Love this...Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 9:22:00 AM
    Nice write Chuck. Greate use of vocabulary. Fun and easy read and oh, what a pleasent picture it paints. Well done. Joe

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 8:58:00 AM
    Oh, I could use up more than these 500 characters allowed ,to be the expositor; sharing my joy of this write, I'll just put it in mine favz if ya don't mind ! much love, james

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 7:56:00 AM
    I like it Chuck, it sounds like a perfect walk with a beloved pet, much enjoyed

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 7:52:00 AM
    I loved fall hikes with my old hound. This brought back good memories..nice write..TAH