Thirst (Grook-Y Look-Y)
the thirst for knowledge
makes one drown in mysteries
the thirst for happiness
makes one drown in miseries
** July 13, 2010---I'm writing this with a half-asleep
brain golly can anyone tell me if this is better --
pretty please? Shucks such a puzzle why I can't
grasp this form?? I need to sleep!! & the wind's
howling outside too!!! Thanks for all who'll give their insights
^_^
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