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They Shoot Horses, Don'T They

To tame a horse in freezing winter One plays a childish "hide and seek" Caress its mane with future spring and kiss the hazel moist with love. Distract its pain with sandy gallops Along the turquoise dreams of freedom And while you heal the reddish wound Recount the legend of the horse with wings. There won't be saddles only clouds That sometimes shed rainbows of tears As darkness falls on killing fields My soul is neighing as echoes cry...

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Date: 6/28/2011 1:17:00 PM
Iolanda, Congratulations on your beautiful second place poem, a pleasure to read. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:36:00 PM
A beautiful one on this theme!! Congrats iolanda on your excellent win in this contest.. love, gautami
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:28:00 AM
Very creative..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:02:00 PM
wow, very deep one, Iolanda and with incredible imagery. congratulations on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on 2nd Place, Iolanda. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda on your "flight of fancy" horse story. you have your way with words. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:30:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Iolanda
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Date: 6/23/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2010 2:55:00 PM
wow, i have not read the winners in the contest. But this one is a stunner, Iolanda! Some great lines in here! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/19/2010 12:19:00 PM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in the contest... a sweet write for a sweeter win from a sweetest poet... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/19/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Iolanda on your success in Dane's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:22:00 PM
enjoyed --well written poem, good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:48:00 AM
Elegantly done, Iolanda...I assume this was inspired by the needless slaughter of these fine animals when they are considered too old and 'used up'? (I could be wrong of course)...I believe there is no 'animal heaven' but ALL of us will share the same one (they deserve to go there more than we do!) Also,I love the title...that is one of my all-time favorite movies! - Tim
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