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There Is No Light

You wasted so much on yesterday, there's little time left for tomorrow. And you've cried so many bitter tears you're drowning in a sea of sorrow. Breaking out of a silken cocoon, you hoped to emerge a butterfly. And when fate didn't unfold like that, you convinced yourself love was a lie. You suckle wishes on soured dreams garnered from make-believe and pretend. And though you greet a thousand faces, there are so few; you can call a friend. Frustrated as the clock ticks away, you're no longer convinced there is hope. And struggling with that reality, you spend all your time; trying to cope. You are an ebony silhouette etched upon the shadows of the night. And dream of passion's eternal bliss without noticing there is no light. (Quatrain) 4/2/2015

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:56:00 PM
Awesome poem. Love it, Emile.
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2015 11:28:00 AM
I especially like the next to last stanza..This is a good one with good flow, rhythm, and rhyme..I am glad that I chose it to read today.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Sara, your visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/2/2015 9:43:00 AM
This is a very wise, yet emotive write, Emile. Filled with superb imagery. Excellent emotional appeal. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/2/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Kimberly, you know how to create a smile. Emile.

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