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A Place Called Beautiful Premiere Contest Winner

There is a place called beautiful nestled deep in my mind's eye Gingham curtains crisply pressed frame periwinkle summer sky Brass kettle on the old gas stove reflects cast iron pans And always at the kitchen sink, I see busy, wrinkled hands. There is a place called beautiful, I'm transported with a whiff Of coffee brewing, dark and strong, I long to take a sip. And in the air a trace of Tollhouse cookies baked this morn And some perfume that only in this special spot is worn. There is a place called beautiful I hear in perfect dreams As Frankie croons and Louis wails all whilst the kettle steams And as she works, she never tires as she hums and sings along But the harmony of her lilting laugh is by far my favorite song. There is a place called beautiful, it tastes like sweetest creams Made in a bucket with a crank til her arms wore out, it seems And topped with juicy berries that would burst upon each bite And juices stained my mouth and clothes most every summer night. There is a place called beautiful, I long to feel again The naive sense that everywhere was as safe and free of sin Where love and peace were daily served with a kiss upon the cheek And grandma's kitchen always felt like you just found what you seek. 4/9/2019 / Poetry Marathon Final Placement / Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 4/21/2019 3:15:00 PM
It's great fun going through the winners and seeing a few poems that use themes i once wrote on, and I'm thinking , wow, I should have entered that one of mine. It was so difficult to know what Mark would enjoy seeing, and I see you chose very well with this theme of reminiscense. Bravo. I love this poem! Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:33:00 PM
Back with more congrats on this poem (that was a FAVE as soon as I read it) and your high placement in this marathon contest, Cindi.
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Date: 4/20/2019 4:39:00 PM
Cindi, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, you have won 12th PLACE overall in my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest!!! Kudos to you for your well-deserved win! ~Mark
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Date: 2/18/2019 2:50:00 PM
this poem is amazing and well deserving of top spot in the contest. Belated congrats to you.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/18/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 2/14/2019 9:50:00 AM
I've seen that very place. This is wonderfully well done. Congratulations.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/14/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you. I wish such places existed today.
Date: 2/13/2019 9:17:00 PM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/13/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thank you for your feedback! <3 Cindi
Date: 2/13/2019 8:06:00 PM
Wow an obvious FAVE for me. Bravo and congrats on your gold medal win, Cindi.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/13/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/13/2019 6:25:00 PM
Cindi, nicely done! Congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 17 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/13/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 8/21/2018 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement in this contest Cindi and its trophy win too in 2016. An amazing piece! : )
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:23:00 AM
So glad to see this beautiful poem again. It is definitely a winner and a beauty !!
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Date: 10/20/2016 9:26:00 AM
The love just oozes between each lovely verse and line of this beautiful poem! I loved it !! Congratulations !
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 10/20/2016 2:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/20/2016 8:35:00 AM
I could smell the cookies and feel the love Mrs Cyndi. A beautiful write about a place we all have somewhere in the back of out minds or lives. A well deserved winner, congratulations.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 10/20/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 10/20/2016 7:58:00 AM
I so enjoyed this nostalgic piece. Slice me a piece a pie and I'll join you at the kitchen table.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 10/20/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thank you. Hope you like apple!
Date: 10/20/2016 7:38:00 AM
Wow, Cindi, what a beautiful poem! I was still teared up after reading Richard's; then I read yours. This is truly great poetry. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 10/20/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/20/2016 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful tribute to grandma. Agnes
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:07:00 PM
Great word choices and pacing. I love the line, "Gingham curtains crisply pressed frame periwinkle summer sky." It just sounds so good when you say it! Congrats on your placement. :-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:44:00 PM
Well expressed! A double congrats for both contests.
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Date: 7/24/2016 5:56:00 PM
Lovely win, Cyndi.
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Date: 7/10/2016 1:44:00 PM
Perfect for you -- but, what about grandma!? Beautiful write. ;-)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/10/2016 3:14:00 PM
Every grandma and grandchild knows the world revolves around the latter! Haha!
Date: 6/21/2016 3:24:00 AM
If this poem was written from personal experience I would say you are rich beyond measure. This is so beautiful Cindi. The way your poem flows so seamlessly and melodic. Wow, what talent you have! Congratulations on your well deserved first place! A fave for me. 7 ; )
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/21/2016 9:09:00 AM
It's a conglomeration of friends' grandmothers' homes, and some in books and dreams. Thank you!
Date: 6/20/2016 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations Cindi, well done and well deserved win...
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/20/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 6/19/2016 11:10:00 AM
yeah Ive just been there after reading this lovely poem stephen congrats
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/19/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/19/2016 8:08:00 AM
This is simply so beautifully written:) Congratulations on a well deserved win, Cindi:)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/19/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thank you.
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