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There are those moments….. spontaneous expressions of life finding expression through the eyes …the voice …the hands …the pen a focus …centering in the being a channel …unclogged an echo ….without reverberation a joy …centering in the being focused ….without aim channeling ….its truth echoing …in chambered moment the spontaneity …..of now. John G. Lawless 11/4/2015 submitted to Oil Paintings 1-2-3 sponsor – Eve Roper painting #3

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Date: 11/18/2015 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations! it seems you may be describing a young John..:), jill
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:20:00 AM
Clever poem and formatting, congrats.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:58:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, John, I love your write congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 11/18/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Eve for sharing your paintings with us and for the ingenious prompts they inspire.
Date: 11/17/2015 9:55:00 PM
John, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 11/18/2015 7:18:00 AM
thanks again....SKAT
Date: 11/17/2015 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations John
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John Lawless
Date: 11/18/2015 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Nayda
Date: 11/17/2015 6:33:00 PM
Love the structure of the poem John - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/18/2015 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Jan, when I watch kids drawing, coloring, or scribbling I am always impressed by the intensity and focus of their endeavor

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