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The Worst Parts of Me

Im a little out of tune Im havin trouble inside Cant explain the chayos that I feel tonight Everythings a mess I can barely breathe And your wonderin wonderin When I stopped bein me I couldnt tell you the truth I couldnt lie to you Im a little out of control I swear Its not my fault I try and I try But nothin seems to work Gotta break me down Gotta take away this diesese Its like im addicted To the worst parts of me And inside I am filled to the brim No one can see how hurt I am So confused by all these things So abused by my own creating Somethings wrong inside my head and I feel, I feel, almost dead.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 10/13/2012 10:01:00 AM

Sometimes at the bottom of the Well trinkets of forgotten gold are found - those indestructable parts of you that shine for new opportunity Jay - Janis Joplin could work wvery well in collaboration with your soul - I want to hear you sing scream and shout YEAH - Love the this tender use of the craft my friend - if you can't tell the truth or lie, then just keep talkin about the possibilities - J.A.B. %

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/12/2012 12:49:00 PM

I should have mentioned that I have been on medication. I dont like it, and I dont approve of it. Some people can not function without it, therefore they should use it. For the majority of time, I can. I dont often have an outbreak, and when I do it may last a few days and it may be hard, but Im confident that I can battle and learn to control my affliction without the help of drugs. Thank you for caring and reading, but please understand its a personal choice.

Sumit Majumdar

Date: 10/12/2012 10:44:00 AM

I would say the same as Anne-Lise. There are medications n you can look forward to full recovery. Golden rule: Don't miss your medicine dose. A poem from the heart. Beautiful! Lots of love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2012 10:33:00 AM

It did not sound out well, go to your doctor - If this is really ..... there are medications for your condition. A touching poem Jay, good recovery. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)