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A Woman and Her Pair of Shoes

this is a story of a woman. work hard for the living. used to work in the evening. her face is filled with glitters. inside the cave of dragons and beasts... she is my beloved childhood friend. she made a letter one day we met. to let the people know 'bout herself. she left it my wallet one morning, and this is what she's telling.... she was only 15 when she left our town. try to experience a life she dreamed about. she dreams to change her life somehow. but trouble had came and wreck her life. thought this man can save her from the dark. but the wheel of fortune did not fave her. she was thrown inside the carcel. she became famous in a world of fools. dancing alone with a pair of shoes. naked and wounded, her soul is abused. too many years passed, our roads had crossed. I saw her picture in front of a door. her hair has colors,her face is old. I went to witness what a world she holds. so many people are watching over, their eyes are glimmer and craving. I look up and see what's amuse them. A question risen up in my head. why is she dancing with just a pair of shoes? that night seemed long, we drove away. we felt each moment, our soul had mate. I've drowned in a passion I dreamed to own. I wake up that morn, I'm all alone. holding a letter she wrote all night long. this is the story of a woman, wearing just a pair of shoes. she is not different from you. she is a princess of her dad. she's an angel, she must be love. Written by: Aiyah De Torres Entry for WOMEN ONLY Poetry Contest ** 4th Place Winner**

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Date: 5/10/2014 5:55:00 AM
Sad and beautiful at the same time; you do well to highlight this problem. Belated congrats on your win:) // paul
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Date: 5/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Aiyah, nice win! Yahoo! Congrats kabayan!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:09:00 AM
Hi Carole... !!! It's been so long girl.. how are you?!?!.. I miss your poems... Hope you post more!! ..Thanks for the visit and comment.. ! ^__^
Date: 4/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
HI AIYAH, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:08:00 AM
Hi SKAT.. sorry for the super late reply... THANKS A LOT sweetheart!! ..:O))
Date: 4/16/2014 9:28:00 AM
This is a significant piece. It is good that you are shedding light on the problem. Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot ,Rick!!! :O))
Date: 4/15/2014 1:18:00 AM
This was a very sad and tragic story, told with sympathy and compassion. Very nicely done, Aiyah! Congratulations on your win!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/15/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much ,Kelly... from the bottom of my heart,,, !!! It's a big honour to be part of your contest.. Thank you for having a heart to put up a contest for WOMEN people!! YOU ROCK!!! :O)) Thanks a lot!! :O)
Date: 2/26/2014 10:25:00 PM
This touched my heart....a 15 Year old girl...being a woman before her time...doing the best she can..just like us...wanting love..rembering love..very sad and sweet
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 7:48:00 AM
thank you ,Donna,...this is just one out of thousands stories of every woman who were became victim of this rotten society...i appreciate your visit so mucH.. ^__^ have a great day ahead :')
Date: 2/25/2014 9:05:00 AM
this is fascinating, aiyah..certainly an interesting and haunting take on the subject matter.. sad but beautiful!.. huggs!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/25/2014 3:07:00 PM
thank you ,Nette..i didn't expect a comment like this..and it's from you..i feel so honored!!! ..tHank you!!! ^__^
Date: 2/24/2014 4:26:00 PM
This a great story..I really enjoyed it...Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/25/2014 3:14:00 PM
Tim...you've been very sweet to me..thanks you liked it!!! .. ^__^
Date: 2/24/2014 3:31:00 PM
Fabulous Story Telling My Dear, Sweet Beautiful Aiyah ~ I Remember Writing A Simple Novice's Poe When I First Arrived At Her Loving's PoetrySoup Called, 'Paper Dolls:' It Was My Own Heart's Empathy As Imagination, For Their Precious Lights *:*(* She May Be Beautiful But Her Heart Does Bleed, Within A World Of Wolves....I Love Your Beauty's Painting; In Bittersweet ~ My Love, Always, John
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/25/2014 3:18:00 PM
thank you ,JoHnny!!! ...it's such a sweet message... thank you for visiting my page ^__^

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