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The Wafting Wind

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/4/2014 9:35:00 AM

Beautfiul and elegant work here, a wonderful blending emotion and nature, cheri

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2014 7:08:00 AM

Wow it's wonderful Charmaine! Swiftly flowing, great!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/3/2014 9:59:00 PM

Another beautiful and inspiring poem, Charmaine! I've read this one three times tonight and can't help coming back again...

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/3/2014 5:54:00 PM

Oh, Charmaine.......there are some of your poems,, I say to myself...."She can't improve on this".....but then you exceed yourself once again. You had me with the "rise of sour yeast"...... your mind works wonders!!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/3/2014 4:48:00 PM

stirring beautifully penned wind charmaine blowing upon a golden pen dear friend

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/3/2014 3:15:00 PM

Very sweet, just like you....Enjoyed the moving without moving...Best wishes to you dear...

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/3/2014 2:51:00 PM

Your moves are like the wind, slipping and filling up the empty spaces, well done sweetie :)

David Meade

Date: 11/3/2014 2:32:00 PM

Outstanding! I feel the wind within your words, lifting me higher! The ending is spectacular, when two winds merge it is a climatic events -- powerful! All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/3/2014 11:47:00 AM

this is absolutely breathtaking Charmaine! Hugs Jan xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/3/2014 11:25:00 AM

You have blown me away with this poem... so beautiful and so many wonderful lines !!! Bravo and thank you !!!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/3/2014 11:21:00 AM

Beautiful and flowing like the wind Charma orbiting around you...love it....hugs Tim