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The When/Where

My love 
For you 
Is not confined 
To the line 
Of this space time continuum
This feeling 
Is not linear 
Or even spherical 
In fact 
It’s just like a tesseract 
No matter 
The floor 
Or the door
You are where I am at 
Got me trapped 
Wanting more 
Got me reeling 
I am not blind 
But my mind 
Is not seeing properly 
Got me thinking 
About the nature of reality 
How this lovely feeling 
Is beyond anything
Such upheaval 
I need to transport you 
To a level 
Far above the clouds 
With my love 
Where we can be 
Our own entity 
Beyond mortality 
Completely wholly 
Combining the two halves 
Of our soul 
The illusion 
Of this temporal institution 
Revealing the true state 
Of our union 
A fusion 
Of chromatic schemes 
Of eclectic dreams 
Mi amore 
My love 
You are my everything

p.d. you truelly are the when/where of my exsistance.

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  1. Date: 10/18/2010 2:54:00 AM
    Profound expression of love Nathan, the sort of love which keeps its strength over years, and years. Good stuff! Thanks also for your welcome visit and comments Nathan. hicky.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 8:25:00 AM
    I feel a science fiction person or someone interested in science in this write along with the love for this woman in his life. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:13:00 PM
    Nathan!!!!! Mm can say it's the truth, to my poem of "ANTICIPATION", because you and your woman have that same kind of love that my man and I!!!double wow!!! Great write Mr. Nathan Dilts, all the best to you and P.D. Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:29:00 AM
    hey, Nate is *p.d.*- for P.oetic D.esires. Just checking. Kidding babe, i love your who? what? when? where? and why? lol, i meant your (P.uter D.edication) of exisitance. the WHEN you need it and the WHERE you want it,,oi,, wow! you are clever and sly like a bunny. I did not see this one xoxooxoxox always yours truly,..P.oet D.estroyer

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 5:19:00 AM
    Romantic write, you got here Mr. Dilts.. enjoyed

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 9:21:00 PM
    Those short lines are breathtaking! What a vertiginous rhytmn, Nathan! Very romantic. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:26:00 AM
    Yes, NatahN you got me smiling this wet Sunday afternoon. It's been raining for almost 3 days already. Someone just told me on chat earlier WHEN it rains it pours, and no matter WHERE your at the exsistance of life traps all liars. lol. I have no idea what it means. It's just a message #1! Like Chris says cute&cute! Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a GOD BLESSED DAY full of love & joy AND PRAYERS!:-) Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 7:18:00 PM
    Awww shucks! You two are just too cute sometimes! Nathan, I most enjoyed your "tesseract" imagery....glad to see that some people still know about tesseracts! *Whew*~Chris

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 3:43:00 PM
    Hi Nathan :D this sure got me smiling this sunny Sunday morning--enjoyed the metaphors in this heartwarming poem-- such the sweetest write for pd -- and pd over here sure seems happy-- I really am soo happy for you two ^_^ --see smiles all over ^_^ ..... ^_^ -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 5:27:00 AM
    Oi,, My Sweet Nathan, and you are mine. Like a shooting star waiting just for your eyes.. For you to make the perfect wish. Even the energy from the wish will reach the stars. And join our fate's together. Every calendar can go by and still nothing will change the emotions my blood feel for you. I will wait patiently for that one wish on the perfect star. Love with hugs and kisses xoxoxoxooxox,..ME