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The When/Where

My love For you Is not confined To the line Of this space time continuum This feeling Is not linear Or even spherical In fact It’s just like a tesseract No matter The floor Or the door You are where I am at Got me trapped Wanting more Got me reeling I am not blind But my mind Is not seeing properly Got me thinking About the nature of reality How this lovely feeling Is beyond anything Such upheaval I need to transport you To a level Far above the clouds With my love Where we can be Our own entity Beyond mortality Completely wholly Combining the two halves Of our soul The illusion Of this temporal institution Fades Revealing the true state Of our union A fusion Of chromatic schemes Of eclectic dreams Mi amore My love You are my everything p.d. you truelly are the when/where of my exsistance.

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Gordon Hickman

Date: 10/18/2010 2:54:00 AM

Profound expression of love Nathan, the sort of love which keeps its strength over years, and years. Good stuff! Thanks also for your welcome visit and comments Nathan. hicky.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/24/2010 8:25:00 AM

I feel a science fiction person or someone interested in science in this write along with the love for this woman in his life. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/23/2010 10:13:00 PM

Nathan!!!!! Mm mmm...you can say it's the truth, to my poem of "ANTICIPATION", because you and your woman have that same kind of love that my man and I have....wow!!!double wow!!! Great write Mr. Nathan Dilts, all the best to you and P.D. Joy (Jew)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 10:29:00 AM

hey, Nate is *p.d.*- for P.oetic D.esires. Just checking. Kidding babe, i love your who? what? when? where? and why? lol, i meant your (P.uter D.edication) of exisitance. the WHEN you need it and the WHERE you want it,,oi,, wow! you are clever and sly like a bunny. I did not see this one coming..lol... xoxooxoxox always yours truly,..P.oet D.estroyer

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/21/2010 5:19:00 AM

Romantic write, you got here Mr. Dilts.. enjoyed

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 11:26:00 AM

Yes, NatahN you got me smiling this wet Sunday afternoon. It's been raining for almost 3 days already. Someone just told me on chat earlier WHEN it rains it pours, and no matter WHERE your at the exsistance of life traps all liars. lol. I have no idea what it means. It's just a message #1! Like Chris says cute&cute! Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a GOD BLESSED DAY full of love & joy AND PRAYERS!:-) Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/11/2010 3:43:00 PM

Hi Nathan :D this sure got me smiling this sunny Sunday morning--enjoyed the metaphors in this heartwarming poem-- such the sweetest write for pd -- and pd over here sure seems happy-- I really am soo happy for you two ^_^ --see smiles all over ^_^ ..... ^_^ -- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2010 5:27:00 AM

Oi,, My Sweet Nathan, and you are mine. Like a shooting star waiting just for your eyes.. For you to make the perfect wish. Even the energy from the wish will reach the stars. And join our fate's together. Every calendar can go by and still nothing will change the emotions my blood feel for you. I will wait patiently for that one wish on the perfect star. Love with hugs and kisses xoxoxoxooxox,..ME