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The Waterman - Visual 1

Oh streaking man on epic sea; bold waterman stoked up on fear, your blue room wall calm lunacy, oh streaking man on epic sea. In magic, bound up ecstasy, your arching nemisis comes near, oh streaking man on epic sea; bold waterman stoked up on fear.

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Olive Lane

Date: 3/14/2018 11:58:00 AM

Nicely written triolet.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/13/2015 8:55:00 PM

A great interpretation of the visual. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:27:00 PM

HIGHWAVE, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:39:00 AM

simply stunning triolet - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Highwave Brian
Date: 6/13/2015 3:54:00 PM

Im so sorry I meant to put !! Not ??

Highwave Brian
Date: 6/13/2015 6:00:00 AM

Thank you ma'am??

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 12:56:00 AM

Oh MAN, I almost put this second place and then I noticed your word Nemis. The word should be nemesis. It can be so easily fixed by just putting in that word and taking out the word "so." I just ADORE this poem!! Congrats in my contest.

Highwave Brian
Date: 6/13/2015 5:55:00 AM

Oh, and I didnt realize this mistake until reading your comment! Oh well. Thankyou for your kind comments.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/29/2015 7:42:00 PM

Wow! Written in the waterman's perspective! Nothing can be more personal with the feeling! You've done great, Brian. 7 from me . Kim

Highwave Brian
Date: 6/13/2015 6:00:00 AM

Yes, the error in the word was just pointed out :-( Im bummed. Thankyou for sharing your dilemma. Ive often hoped to find myself in the "blueroom" but havent just yet!

Highwave Brian
Date: 5/29/2015 8:07:00 PM

Thankyou ma'am :-)