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Voyeur Moon

====================== The voyeur moon has promised she will hide her light tonight and keep it dark outside if we'll agree to let her watch us while we sleep ====================== 09/27/2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 9:46:00 PM

LYCIA, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/14/2016 4:35:00 AM

Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Lycia.

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2016 10:46:00 PM

Lycia, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT **

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 1:25:00 PM

I enjoyed seeing your entry for super moon contest today. Congrats for the win.

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/11/2015 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andie! xoxo

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:35:00 AM

Lycia, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/9/2015 2:20:00 AM

Awwwww....that's cute! Thank you SKAT! wuv LyLy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:15:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/8/2015 8:45:00 PM

Hi Sara! Thank you, my Dear. xoxo

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 3:40:00 PM

delightful imagery Lycia many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/7/2015 6:46:00 PM

Thank you, my Dear Jan! xoxo

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 3:21:00 PM

Lycia, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/7/2015 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, Eve and thank you so much for the win! Excellent 'current affairs' idea for a contest. Keep em comin!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/30/2015 10:11:00 PM

OH My!!!!! What a lovely piece, Lycia. I so liked this. :) Good luck in the contest!! I loved the rhythm and flow...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:47:00 PM

No, I'm no entering this one, dear. Inspiration hasn't made a visit yet.

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/30/2015 10:30:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen and luck, luck, luck to you as well, if you also enter! xoxo

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/29/2015 9:19:00 PM

to watch you as you sleep....is a dream I am sure many keep....because you and your words are both the same....simply Beautiful, how could any complain....;)

Lycia Harding
Date: 10/3/2015 5:08:00 PM

Have you watched somebody sleep before? ...*... Its really not that smart ...*... Its bad enough you must watch them snore ...*... but worse to watch them fart!

James Horn

Date: 9/29/2015 5:37:00 AM

Was going to say enlightening but don't know if that is appropriate or not. Thanks for comment about my Women Poets poem. Jim Horn

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:28:00 PM

Lycia, this is beautiful.... I feel her looking at me. SKAT

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/28/2015 10:13:00 PM

You wish, SKAT, put your clothes back on! Heh heh. Thank you, this was almost as fun as your Drunken Moon

Paul Callus

Date: 9/28/2015 11:12:00 AM

A lovely and flowing quatrain aided by smooth rhyme. Like the image of a voyeur moon watching discreetly. ~ gl in the contest. // paul

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/28/2015 2:26:00 PM

PS - I find that your comments themselves are always lovely and flowing and smoothly laid out. Gl to you as well if you enter! Xoxo

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/28/2015 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Paul. Yes , you nailed it - shes prepared to sell out everything shes about as long as she can still get her peep on. Shes not motherly, shes freaky!