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the visit

my love came to me
with a song
i played it over and over
all day long
and love reminded me 
of memories
memories that have 
traveled through 
my heart, my mind and soul
showing me things
my eye's can no longer behold
my ears can no longer hear
or my hands grasp
or my tommorows hope for
she showed me love i had 
and wished i had
yes indeed i was very glad
my memories today 
the best i ever had

thoughts of her
dived in and out of me
changing me like channels
playing me like keys
all my deep emotions
each one as she pleased
my joy, my tears
she vanquished my fears
we spoke and said what we came
to say
that our love
will live forever and a day
i was amazed at how God
let her speak 
in his secret and special way
that He and i speak
i know you don't believe
you have to have faith
when i need God the most
He shows me 
a little of His face

(this is a true story)

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  1. Date: 8/22/2011 10:36:00 PM
    This speaks to my soul. Beautiful. I feel I have lived the same moment. Yours most true, Windyann

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 9:16:00 PM
    Very nicely done my friend. A beautiful piece. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 7/7/2011 3:39:00 PM
    beautiful John and I esp love the last stanza. Nice job with that, Well done myt friend

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 5:47:00 PM
    this was a great write john hope to share more with you. cory

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 7:59:00 AM
    Love this one, introspective and deeply sensitive. Very well done my friend. xoxo

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 4:48:00 PM
    like all of your poetry...amazing. Touching. Beautiful. Thank you for writing and you were right, the faithful DO stick around :) Got 5 comments today! Ha reassurance is a beautiful thing. Thanks again

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 8:28:00 AM
    I love this poem and it shows your deep emotional faith with God. I know what you mean. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 4:19:00 PM
    Enjoyed this one John...It left me wondering though...Is this a new person that you have met or is it about memories of the past?...My poem "Loves Flame Drenched" is about differences in the sexes or personalities..Like a woman who enjoys a romantic movie which is a stress relief and a soft go between work, home, children, problems, etc. to lead to romance..Then the man who wants to watch a Western, murder mystery, boxing, wrestling as a stress relief, go between work and play...Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 1:00:00 PM
    I can relate to this on some level...unearthly a way it taps into my poem 'double phantasy', similar subject matter but different circumstances..."changing me like channels/playing me like keys" those are two great lines my sweet...

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 3:26:00 AM
    nicely great, well done sir.

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 9:05:00 PM
    sweetly emotional piece John.. feeling your pain of loss of one so special..yet she is ever with u in spirit luv.. very tender expressions. ..luv.