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Unicorns - are they all just in my illusive dreams? If I’ll see them, I’ll be much delighted and I’ll scream, Once I saw them up above, just up there over my head They’re the heart of constellation and I wasn’t misled. Oh, how I love to ride at the back of those unicorns! In the sky, they look like flying at the gleams of the moon, Hovering above the clouds, I’ll look down with exhilaration I’ll overcome my fears and get more strength to carry on. I wish, I’ll not yet wake up in this dream of mine, As I keep on riding on those amazing and one lovely kind Like a Queen of Heaven with one mighty sword on my hand, Even worst enemies will bow offering humbly their crown. The unicorns are also real, they are found in the heart, They’re white and dainty, just trust and don’t give a doubt For their love is real, giving it straight like their spiral horn, When pierced they can endure, a gift when they were born. First Place Winner Contest: Unicorn Poem Judged: 10/5/12 Sponsor: Poet Poet-Destroyer (PD) Written : Sept. 29,2012 By Leonora Galinta I am dedicating this poem to my dear friend, PD on her BIRTHDAY, OCTOBER 7, 2012. Here are lovely and mighty libran unicorns for you with their lovely queen!(smile). I am looking forward for your great and lovely Natal Day!

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Date: 11/17/2012 8:56:00 PM
Hi Leo... i guess,,, my computer is more important then my headache... LOL.. well, it is almost 10 pm here... I will read a few contest poems and then log off... i hope... unless you say hi before i log off.. see you in a bit sis... always~ pd
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Date: 10/20/2012 4:21:00 PM
Hi, I got your soup-mail... did you get mind responding about the contest.... the one you send me was in reference to the form clerihew... hope you are well...your sis~pd
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Date: 10/8/2012 11:15:00 AM
You took me for a wonderful ride in the heavens with this one, Leonora!...Congrats on your win - Tim
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Date: 10/6/2012 10:17:00 AM
A very enjoyable read. Congratulations on the worthy win.
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Date: 10/6/2012 6:04:00 AM
congrats on your win Leonora
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Date: 10/6/2012 12:17:00 AM
Many congrats Leonara for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:01:00 PM
WHEEEE, a big number one for you. I just KNEW you would be on top, Congrats and again, happy birthday.
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful Leonora. A fine birthday gift for PD...You win is well deserved! Cynthia
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:55:00 AM
Wow!! Congrats for this very creative poem. I like it!!cheers my dear friend :)
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:21:00 AM
Well done Leonora a superb write xx
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem dedicated to the birthday girl PD. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:51:00 AM
remarkably done. leonora.. :) sweet congrats!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congrats Leonora!! Magical!
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:17:00 AM
Happy Birthday once again Leonora, . Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:33:00 PM
A wonderful unicorn poem from you , Leonora. PD is going to love this one!!! (Oh, I just peeked down and saw she loved it)
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:00:00 PM
I like the celestial presence you ascribe to these magnificent beasts Lenora - all true Queens should have a Unicorn - the last line regarding endurance is a great compliment - long live PD. - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:42:00 PM
Hi Leonora, 3 more days in counting... xox~PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:50:00 AM
Beautifully poem Leonora - Both thumbs up for you in the contest!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2012 12:05:00 AM
great poem again my dear friend!! good luck always. God bless you!! hugs!!!
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Date: 9/29/2012 10:00:00 PM
Hi Leonora, , i love it... Like I told Andrea, super shame on me for peeking..LOL~ always~ PD
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:50:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - I know PD will love it : )
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