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the truth hurts

your the one i choose
when the mistress is confused
and has been misused

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:59:00 AM
    reminds me of Brian Adams : Run to You ;} I like it. Yes I do think "the Divine has compassion ;} thank you for reading my words .

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Well articulated... the rhyming is a splendid touch, and the 575 composition! BRAVO, John! Best wishes, Keith (Thanks for your kind words.)

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:03:00 PM
    I remember this one. I really like it.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Not sure how to take this poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 7:54:00 PM
    Hey is this written to a wife, telling her about a mistress? It's strange but kinda funny if that's the case!!

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 6:57:00 PM
    Well shiver me timbers I do believe you may well be an undercover tsunami coming at us through words. Thanks john quite enjoyable

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 5:39:00 PM
    Well, John, I could jump to all kinds of conclusions about this one..I hope that you mean that you chose soup to come to when things are not right and you need some uplifting or maybe it is God that you turn to in those times..That would be even better..Enjoyed reading anyway..Thanks for stopping by my Fig write..Trying to get a grip on those Cinquains..I hope that spring is coming your way if that is what you desire...Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:51:00 PM
    Hi John, enjoyed the deeper thought in this, had to think about it for awhile. How are you doing? Luv, LIzzie

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 6:31:00 PM
    Nice one John... it's true the whole truth is a hard pill to swallow.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Yes, John the truth can hurts alot.Well done haiku. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:31:00 PM
    hhmm... emotion's ride here...