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The Truth Hurts

your the one i choose when the mistress is confused and has been misused

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/8/2013 12:59:00 AM

reminds me of Brian Adams : Run to You ;} I like it. Yes I do think "the Divine has compassion ;} thank you for reading my words .

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/4/2012 8:54:00 PM

Well articulated... the rhyming is a splendid touch, and the 575 composition! BRAVO, John! Best wishes, Keith (Thanks for your kind words.)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2012 9:03:00 PM

I remember this one. I really like it.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/5/2012 12:39:00 PM

Not sure how to take this poem. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 7:54:00 PM

Hey is this written to a wife, telling her about a mistress? It's strange but kinda funny if that's the case!!

Leonard Taormina

Date: 3/18/2012 6:57:00 PM

Well shiver me timbers I do believe you may well be an undercover tsunami coming at us through words. Thanks john quite enjoyable

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2012 5:39:00 PM

Well, John, I could jump to all kinds of conclusions about this one..I hope that you mean that you chose soup to come to when things are not right and you need some uplifting or maybe it is God that you turn to in those times..That would be even better..Enjoyed reading anyway..Thanks for stopping by my Fig write..Trying to get a grip on those Cinquains..I hope that spring is coming your way if that is what you desire...Sara