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The Trinity

God the maker of love For he will never boast And he lives up above But with him also lives a ghost Who is a most unwelcomed host For Dr. Ram Mehta's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations Brittany on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 6:01:00 PM

Great to see you in the top ten Brittany. Congratulations on your worthy poem's tenth place. Agape, Moses

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2011 8:07:00 AM

I really, really liked this. Smiles and congrats to you

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 4:23:00 AM

Many Congrats Brittany on your big win with this excellent entry..Love, Gautami

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 4:02:00 AM

Many congrats Brittany for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 6:26:00 PM

Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Brittany, Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Brittany.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:25:00 PM

Congrats Brittany on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing creative entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv and happy weekend too..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in my contest, Brittany