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The Timeless Bond

As a giant wave rises with passion aroused by the overtures from the moon I surf within its folds with high tension, As a giant wave rises with passion racing ashore with intense emotion I must unravel this timeless bond soon As a giant wave rises with passion aroused by the overtures from the moon. Visual#1 "One Lovely Summer Triolet" contest by Andrea Diatrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/15/2015 9:58:00 AM
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Congrats on your win, Abdul! Nice write! Love. Kim
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Skat A
Date: 6/13/2015 6:33:00 PM
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ABDUL, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 5:48:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2015 1:17:00 AM
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Abdul. this is very nice. In the future, when you rhyme two syllable words like passion, you should find rhymes that have stress on the first syllable, such as ration or fashion! Congrats in my contest.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 6/13/2015 1:04:00 AM
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Congrats on your win:) Alexis
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/1/2015 11:59:00 AM
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what a passionate dive and a poetic swirl, abdul... enjoyed this!.. huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/1/2015 6:02:00 PM
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Appreciate your comments, nette. Thanks.
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Skat A
Date: 5/27/2015 6:30:00 PM
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Abdul, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT"
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 4:23:00 PM
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beautifully penned Abdul good luck in the contest - have finally finished mine will post it tomorrow:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 2:41:00 AM
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I will post mine later today Abdul - I found this form a real challenge - add to your title 'visual one' - its in the rules:-) Hugs jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/27/2015 5:40:00 PM
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Thanks Jan. Eager to see yours. You seems to be hitting the nail on the head lately. You are doing pretty good.

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