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The Tiger Rock and Leopard Black

From the wood where coyotes play Blackie cat came on a summer’s day. Called seemingly, to fill the place where Rocky the cat lay dreaming. A proud old tom who’d seen his end Rocky had held it long at bay. A Guardian was he of Mom you see, but when he passed she’d stay. And he’d not leave till he knew she would not be alone… He’d found ole Blackie for her to give them both a happy home. Blackie and he had many a day of lolling in the grass and sun. But Rocky’s porch he would not share that was for Mom and he the only one. She feed them both, each to his own and cared for both in kind. Rocky’s plan, he was the man… was to not leave her alone inside. So, Rocky's sweet self sacrifice of staying much too long was blessed with painless passing He died in Mommy’s arms. Now everyday, ole Blackie comes as Rocky told him too. To keep his Mommy company another Guardian true. Still too frightened to come inside, Mom’s sure he will one day. And on that day they’d both be sure that Blackie’d come to stay. *Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/8/2010 12:37:00 PM
A seamless narrative of pure beauty
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Date: 9/7/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:16:00 PM
A beautiful and touching story of two faithful cats Deb. I am a big cat lover. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations! Heart renting stanza third from the last Debbie. Gospel truth though the way one feels about a baby leaving, almost. I'm just a heart person about such things. Excellent job! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations for this nice win in Constance's contest, Debbie
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Date: 9/3/2010 9:49:00 AM
REally nice, Deb. I enjoyed this cat "tail" lUv, andrea
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:43:00 AM
Thanks everyone!
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:30:00 PM
beautiful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:26:00 PM
Very nice Debbie. Congratulations . Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:12:00 PM
A great story and a well deserved win, dear Deb. Congratulations! Meow! :)
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:08:00 PM
I hope Blackie warms up to you, and learns to trust....Cats are much smarter than most animals...it takes longer to earn their confidence...but once you do they own you! Good luck! :)
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:03:00 PM
Congrats on your purr fect win Debbie .. in the CAT contest .. a great write and win to enjoy... did u see my tiger blog today..luv..? have a safe and happy holiday weekend.. with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:35:00 PM
I miss my Rock! Blackie stillwon't let me near him & winter will be here soon pray he does! fret
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:29:00 PM
I thought this would be in the winners' circle, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 12:25:00 PM
Nice.
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Date: 8/26/2010 2:36:00 PM
Ok OK is this MY leaopard?? haha just joking TEACH ... great write for the contest.. I presume so good luck... reads like a sure winner to your pupil... when I get home mid Sept... will be mailing u a package so be on the lookout but not till mid Sept... got to get home and get to P.O. to mail..luv... awwwwww.... its NOT a gold apple..
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:07:00 PM
Nice read, and the attachment of Blackie to Mom is well versed and described throughout the poem. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:47:00 PM
Cute poem, Deborah. Liked the relationship that developed between Rocky and ole Blackie. Wishing you success in Constance's cat contest! Love, Carolyn
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